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Glucose Gelatin Glycerin.
Plants start to spread their pollen,
Hearts begin harp halo strumming.

Fluoride Fructose Formal-hydride.
Time to tan, make up, an work out,
Buds birth's in celebrated flower rehearsal.

Oscars Oatmeal Orange-rinds.
Writers write in park bench light,
Artists create in bulk beside lines.

Mayonnaise Monet Monuments.
Days stay around in delayed fulfillment,
The grass is golden green, look, go feel it.

Caffeine Cantonese Courage.
Its picturesque, quick start a sketch,
With paper in ivory, an pens in dark ink.

Toblerone Testosterone Testarossas.
Gone fishing, far from home, all by myself,
Cooked on fires, in outdoor kitchen spots.

Vicodin Valium Vermillion.
Hence the accusation of such a great season,
I'm looking for reason, it's clear before me, unpeeling.

Satiation Seduction Scarabs.
We sit in mighty light beamed from pitch nothing,
We show we have the know to borrow comet trails.

Procrastination Plastic Petroleum.
Follow them, their heading for the enclosure of fun,
Pick up the crumbs left by their screamed joyful lungs.

Byzantium Blankets Bitumen.
Coiled time has sprung    delight    its mine,   to be.
Every new bud's love is taken back to winter within   me.
©2008-2009 ~spysays
:iconspysays:

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Spring. Spring let's all wake up early and let the sun shine in.

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:iconstarsdie:
cool (: it's the most windy spring ever, here.
:iconspysays:
and where is here?

ever is a long time... you must be old. B)

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They told me too.
:iconspysays:
tastes good huh.

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They told me too.
:iconwesleyj:
:jawdrop:
more to follow

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Again :resume: my opinion

Brought to you by :job:
:innocent:
To those who say I can't write hip-hop,
maybe mine is what rocks,
cos it comes straight from the top,
It's what your's is not,
It's not pop...:work:
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:iconwesleyj:
:sun: ain't nothing but sunshine bra...
Loving the alliteration at the begining of the verses...
3 - line break down ryme on into the next repatition alliteration extention into the next serious case of flow ahead.........woah
Mad Respect for this one:worship:

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Again :resume: my opinion

Brought to you by :job:
:innocent:
To those who say I can't write hip-hop,
maybe mine is what rocks,
cos it comes straight from the top,
It's what your's is not,
It's not pop...:work:
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:iconspysays:
:headbang:ing :orange:s

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They told me too.
:iconspysays:
:bow: much respect dude. Thanks tons!! It's quite an old one but found it lieing around.

Looking over it i could change a few things, maybe even enter it into an upcoming summer competition. LOL who knows.

I'm overjoyed you enjoyed the words of the never heard!!!!

a million thanks!!

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They told me too.
:iconwesleyj:
nothing but a serious pleasure dude:salute:

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Again :resume: my opinion

Brought to you by :job:
:innocent:
To those who say I can't write hip-hop,
maybe mine is what rocks,
cos it comes straight from the top,
It's what your's is not,
It's not pop...:work:
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