The type took true shape inside time so long ago,
In my head, a seed of text begins sprouting to grow,
From air words picked two by two 'till stanzas appeared,
Scribbled on canvas was a fear for classification, but now I stand style cleared,
Writing 'till the dark flirts,
Thinking about a bulb,
Trawling books full of word,
Telling you what I heard,
Now I wish I could just let go, take pen to paper like the last time together,
How they flowed, and churned, then chimed with basic rhyme on basic structure,
When did blue dye become mathematics and science in barely a moments notice?
As a fire fly in a night's sky, a dot robbed of grandeur by the billion sparks of the ceilings shouting voice,
Shook a million holy books,
Checked every glossary,
No-one owns a monopoly,
Insurance shared it slowly,
We crush a thousand works of art and chat crying we're lost,
An eternal menu of talents is put to silence cost,
But a critic wouldn't admit it, but a fan wouldn't say,
Take my words away. Let them keep you awake, I prey for days,













Comments
I wonder what word the books were full of.
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You have four nostrils, just to let you know.
Glad you enjoyed.
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They told me too.
i'm so taken back by his one....absolutly stunning dude!
you're structure,and flow dude,
you don't even need to try to rhyme anymore,you just pu it down and magic seems to happen
and that fire fly /night sky line
woah dude...oneday i'll write like this....
as longf as you keep putting up quality stuff like this to inspire me
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To those who say I can't write hip-hop,
maybe mine is what rocks,
cos it comes straight from the top,
It's what your's is not,
It's not pop...
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i so got you with this peice bra...JUICE
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To those who say I can't write hip-hop,
maybe mine is what rocks,
cos it comes straight from the top,
It's what your's is not,
It's not pop...
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They told me too.
Why that pen to paper line so much? (Just curious)
LOL many complimented on the stucture and flow dude, thanks!! but I still have to put mad work into it. This piece actually took me quite a while to get all the lines just right.... but I learnt that from you.
You already do!
Glad you caught the subject LOL The days of unispiration suck!!!
thanks ami I will try.
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They told me too.
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They told me too.
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Again
Brought to you by
To those who say I can't write hip-hop,
maybe mine is what rocks,
cos it comes straight from the top,
It's what your's is not,
It's not pop...
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