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The type took true shape inside time so long ago,
In my head, a seed of text begins sprouting to grow,
From air words picked two by two 'till stanzas appeared,
Scribbled on canvas was a fear for classification, but now I stand style cleared,

Writing 'till the dark flirts,
Thinking about a bulb,
Trawling books full of word,
Telling you what I heard,

Now I wish I could just let go, take pen to paper like the last time together,
How they flowed, and churned, then chimed with basic rhyme on basic structure,
When did blue dye become mathematics and science in barely a moments notice?
As a fire fly in a night's sky, a dot robbed of grandeur by the billion sparks of the ceiling’s shouting voice,

Shook a million holy books,
Checked every glossary,
No-one owns a monopoly,
Insurance shared it slowly,

We crush a thousand works of art and chat crying we're lost,
An eternal menu of talents is put to silence cost,
But a critic wouldn't admit it, but a fan wouldn't say,
Take my words away.   Let them keep you awake,    I prey for days,
©2008-2009 ~spysays
:iconspysays:

Author's Comments

sitting awake dreaming of everything inbetween thinking of all the things that keep me awake. Wondering how we wonder while we sleep. And thinking of the things I could've thought.

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:iconblue-strawberry:
I like this, especially the first stanza.

I wonder what word the books were full of.

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You have four nostrils, just to let you know.
:iconspysays:
Many thanks. all kinds of word. spoken word, educational word, religious word, scriptures etc.

Glad you enjoyed.

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They told me too.
:iconstarsdie:
We crush a thousand works of art hell yeah, sounds good.
:iconwesleyj:
"take pen to paper like the last time together,"
i'm so taken back by his one....absolutly stunning dude!
you're structure,and flow dude,
you don't even need to try to rhyme anymore,you just pu it down and magic seems to happen
and that fire fly /night sky line:jawdrop:
woah dude...oneday i'll write like this....
as longf as you keep putting up quality stuff like this to inspire me:D

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Again :resume: my opinion

Brought to you by :job:
:innocent:
To those who say I can't write hip-hop,
maybe mine is what rocks,
cos it comes straight from the top,
It's what your's is not,
It's not pop...:work:
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:iconwesleyj:
btw...subject matter...
i so got you with this peice bra...JUICE

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Again :resume: my opinion

Brought to you by :job:
:innocent:
To those who say I can't write hip-hop,
maybe mine is what rocks,
cos it comes straight from the top,
It's what your's is not,
It's not pop...:work:
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:iconspysays:
I'm pretty sure I replied to this??

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They told me too.
:iconspysays:
I'm humbled by your words dude.

Why that pen to paper line so much? (Just curious)

LOL many complimented on the stucture and flow dude, thanks!! but I still have to put mad work into it. This piece actually took me quite a while to get all the lines just right.... but I learnt that from you.

You already do!

Glad you caught the subject LOL The days of unispiration suck!!!

thanks ami I will try.

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They told me too.
:iconspysays:
word ....... or words B)

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They told me too.
:iconwesleyj:
words

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Again :resume: my opinion

Brought to you by :job:
:innocent:
To those who say I can't write hip-hop,
maybe mine is what rocks,
cos it comes straight from the top,
It's what your's is not,
It's not pop...:work:
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